my senior orchestra concert was last night. we played the piece i composed, and it was the best feeling in the world. when i finished it, i ran over to green-eyes and hugged him, saying thank you, thank you for soloing. he didn't hug me back.
maybe it was because he wasn't expecting it. maybe it was because his parents were right next to him. maybe it was because he had a cup of punch in his hand, or because he's just not a touchy person. but i'm pretty sure it was just me. i'm a dangerous girl. i'm unstable. and i'm not the girl he took to prom.
i immediately pulled away and said sorry. i don't think he heard me. then his little sister asked me to sign her program because for sure i was going to be a famous composer someday.
for you critiquers, because i'm selfish and i want feedback:
so much symbolism in this. is it good, or too much? do you even notice it?
do the three movements balance well?
is there a good distribution between florid/simple language?
anything else you want to comment on?
(do the pretty words cover up the angst enough? XD)